It's a cold winter and nobody believes that there's a gigantic bone crushing monster under my tiny bed my siblings think i'm insane! but it's true and i'm
gonna get proof.
I wake up with a smile on my face to start my adventure i invite my two best friends Tyler is the engineer in our group and Jacob is the popular one with all of the attention going to him.
I told Tyler if he could help build a camera to get proof and to see who stealing my crackers! he agreed and he yelled "Jacob!! get us drinks".
Its six o clock and we finished before the street lights turned on
"But were's Jacob with our drinks" says Tyler with a worried face we get scared what if the monster took him and gobbling him up piece by piece.
We ran up in to my room shaking like a fainting goat under the sheets then....BOOM "Something is looking for us" whispered Tyler "HA HA HA COME ON ITS DINER"screamed the monster we ran pushing the monster.
3 am struck and i'm wide away holding a bat. it's quiet and everybody's calm except me "KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK ANYBODY HOME!
Tyler did you hear that i whispered holding the bat at the door "Huh no are you okay" he shout's after i'm holding the bat at his head i think its the monster.
This ginormous hole ripping my floor like a king eating the finest KFC then out of the blue he says "You nark" taking bark with him i burst into tears hitting him straight in the eye with the bat breaking completely.
My mom rushes in my room hearing all the ruckus then seeing the monster gobbling bark she screams "What the hell is that" "I'm the monster" with a grin on his face "Wheres Jacob" Tyler screeched "I'm over here" chucking the drinks burning the monsters skin "ree it burns" run everybody its about to blow the whole house blows up destroying everything we own "my house" my dad screams at me with a furious face.
A whole year without a house but we now live in a gorgeous house with no monsters i think
By Te Whetu
Kia Ora Te Whetu, Liked the blog post and your a rely good writer and you should keep writing. When I did it I made the picture to mach and that is cool like it and.
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Kia ora Tewhetu, I like this piece of writing because of the sequencing of your paragraphs and how they link to each other. The speech marks are great to show who is talking. Ataahua. I like how you've written in capitals that this particular part of spoken text is urgent. Perhaps next time a detailed description of your taniwha. I certainly would like to know too. Ka rawe!
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